While Social Security started off as a brilliant program that would be able to sustain itself no matter what changes in populations occurred, changes made to the system have made it so that the program is failing and by the time many people who pay into it reach the age where they could benefit there will be nothing left.
Excellent! You may want to do some simple editing for conciseness is all. Also: this may be two sentences instead of one. Think of how to make it digestable. Otherwise, the ideas are clear and well-formed while the writing is also strong. Good work, Ryan!
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