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Thesis

While Social Security started off as a brilliant program that would be able to sustain itself no matter what changes in populations occurred, changes made to the system have made it so that the program is failing and by the time many people who pay into it reach the age where they could benefit there will be nothing left.

While Social Security started off as a brilliant program that would be able to sustain itself no matter what fluctuations in populations occurred. Changes made to the system have made it so that the program is failing and by the time many people who pay into it reach the age where they could benefit from it, there will be nothing left.

Revision

In 1929 America’s stock market crashed and in the chaos that ensued that incident the nation slipped into an economic depression which has become to be known as the Great Depression. This depression prompted action to be taken by the government and was manifested in President Franklin D. Roosevelt’s New Deal. This deal helped America’s economy in many different ways such as giving the unemployed jobs, improving the standard of living by building new roads and bridges, and giving older workers incentives to retire. This deal provided benefits to retirees, people with disabilities, and the unemployed so that they might survive.

In 1929, America’s stock market crashed. In the chaos that ensued, the nation slipped into an economic depression which has hence become known as the Great Depression. This turmoil prompted the government to take action which was manifested in President Franklin D. Roosevelt’s New Deal. This deal helped America’s economy in many different ways such as giving the unemployed jobs, giving older workers incentives to retire and providing benefits to retirees, people with disabilities, and the unemployed so that they might have economic security in hard times.